General info:
Home
Joining
Rules 
How it works
Participation
Too Many Emails?
Formatting
Listserv Settings
Contact Us

Critiquing Lists:
Fiction
Lovestory
Nonfiction
Novels
Poetry
Practice
Prose/Flash-fiction
Script-writing
Child/Young adult

Discussion Lists:
Writing
Creative Nonfiction
MarketChat
SFChat

The IWW Blog Writing Advice

Other Topics:
FAQ
LINKS
Our administrators
Other writing lists
Books on writing
IWW History
Showcase of Successes


IWW Practice-W Exercise Archives
Exercise: Spiritual Encounter

These exercises were written by IWW members and administrators to provide structured practice opportunities for its members. You are welcome to use them for practice as well. Please mention that you found them at the Internet Writers Workshop (http://www.internetwritingworkshop.org/).

Proposed by Sarah Corbett Morgan
Prepared by Norman Cooper
Posted on: Sunday, April 8, 2018
Posted on: Sunday, November 14, 2021



In 400 words or less describe a moment in which your character experiences
a strong spiritual, or unidentifiable, energy. Describe the scene in vivid
detail with particular attention to the senses.

__________________________________

Spiritual encounters, whether a messenger from the heavens or demons from
the underworld, show up in classic and contemporary literature, and abound
in folk tales and popular entertainment.

Helpful spirits might appear to deliver a message, answer a prayer, give
someone comfort or a warning of peril in the near future. Evil spirits
show up to make trouble for a mortal such as demon possession or a horror
haunting.

In your scene, how does your character respond to the encounter? Was the
encounter vividly described How would you describe the main character's
reaction? Was he frightened, enlightened, or comforted? Did his response
ring true, in your POV?

__________________________________

In your critique, tell the author how you felt as you read the story. Could
you relate to the impact the experience had on the character? Would you
read on? Why? If the piece did not work for you, what could the author do
to make it better?


Web site created by Rhéal Nadeau and the administrators of the Internet Writing Workshop.
Modified by Greg Gunther.