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Exercise: Who are these people?

These exercises were written by IWW members and administrators to provide structured practice opportunities for its members. You are welcome to use them for practice as well. Please mention that you found them at the Internet Writers Workshop (http://www.internetwritingwor kshop.org/).

Prepared by: Carter Jefferson
Posted on: 10/22/2006


Exercise: In less than 400 words, write the opening to a story or novel based on the picture at the link below. If you're female, write from the man's POV; if you're male, the woman's.

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Writers find inspiration everywhere. For this exercise, find your inspiration in the painting you'll see when you click the link below. The picture dates from 1947, but you may set your story in any time or place you'd like.

But wait! There's more. Most writers tend naturally to create a protagonist of the same sex the writer is. There are exceptions, of course: men write romances with female protagonists, and women mysteries whose heroes are hard-boiled policemen. Today we're asking you to stretch your muscles: Write from the point of view of the opposite sex.

Here's the link. Edward Hopper, "Summer Evening":  http://tinyurl.com/gwv53
(Click on your ":back" button to return here.)
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Exercise: In less than 400 words, write the opening to a story or novel based on the picture at the link above.  If you're female, write from the man's POV; if you're male, the woman's.

When critiquing, tell the writer whether you'd want to read more of the story. Is it clearly inspired by the painting? Are the characters realistic? Is the scene well set to develop the story? Did the writer succeed in using the opposite POV? If she or he didn't do it effectively, what went wrong? Give specific reasons, if you can.


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